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35 Reviews | 5 w/ Responses
It's tweened, and it's tweened well, and I have to admit you picked some rather fitting music.
But where was the fbf? Where was the length? Where was the laugh out loud humor? Where's the length? Where was anything else you can find that isn't sorely lacking?
Where's the soul?
This was an ok submission but I don't believe it deserved an award...
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Spam is one thing, but poor spam... Is another thing. Another WORSE thing.
...That sounded better in my head then it looks when written down, but it'll do.
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I really liked this. When looking at the art style you use, it kind of leaves you not expecting much. But there was some really nice fbf in there; good lip-sync. I liked the show-offish bit with the lighting effects as he walked across the room, that was pretty coold. ;)
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I'm sad because some pathetic individual allowed this to pass judgement.
This must have taken you about 30 mins, give or take a few? I've seen people who put way more effort into their submissions blammed to hell. Tell me honestly, was this made with powerpoint? The voice was off sync, by the way, and your mic is pretty bad quality aswell...
Author's Response:
Nah, it wasn't made in powerpoint the FLASH PORTAL doesn't allow powerpoint submissions, if it did it should be called the POWERPOINT PORTAL.
But anyway, yeah, it didn't take long. i should spend more time on it.
And anyway, this wasn't made individually, my friend helped with (made the song)
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Effortless dude. Totally effortless.
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This was given a collection add and showcased before it had even passed judgement. I'm not gonna give my views on whether that's agood thing or not, but wow. Wow.
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Well, I think you did quite well for a first timer. Sprites are quite easy however, in future you might want to try your own art. However, I think you made quite good use of them, quite inventive. I know fight animations usually work well on high frame rates, but you might want to turn it down a bit, sometimes the speed made it difficult to tell what was happening.
Overall, pretty bad, but much better than the first thing I created.
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This flash is rather dull, and poorly animated. Simple shapes that are tweened
about don't deserve much credit. However, you have potential. The movement was quite nicely done, I know that sometimes when you're tweening it can look quite linear, or worse, but you pulled it off quite well. Try adding a little detail to the background even if you want to make your characters look simplistic. Overall, not bad, but you should practice a bit more before making this into a series.
I've seen better things that haven't passed judgement, so don't lose hope. Someone out there likes your style. :)
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A great piece of work. The fbf was very smooth, and it looked nice. The artwork was great, I really enjoyed just taking it all in. It has a great feel to it and I like that wierd pyramid monster idea.
The only thing I can find fault with is what happens when you see the monster running from the side. It looks a little exaggerated. However, this is only a small detail, and overall this animation is perfection.
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To be honest, I don't know where to start... The animation was AWFUL. Stuff that was happening was terribly hard to follow, and from what I gathered, it wasn't even that funny. The art was... Questionable. To be honest, I've never seen something so bad pass judgement, and I have a bad feeling that it was because it was a video game parody. You scrape a couple of points for making an effort, at least...
Author's Response:
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